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Friday, July 9, 2010

Life: Two Faces

My birth

Determined

My love

Deceived

My hope

Jeopardized

My soul

Cursed

My religion

Hacked

My life

Pierced

My death

Ascertained.



My birth

Anticipated

My love

Embraced

My hope

Cultivated

My soul

Liberated

My religion

Endured

My life

Exalted

My death

Redeemed.


31 comments:

  1. I guess there's always two sides to every story.... :)

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  2. tiang poetry hi eng 'genre' nge? chhair a nuam ...

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  3. captures the agnostic and the believer in all of us. good stuff

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  4. Heti zawng hian: Padma Shree in Literature i dawn hun chuan ka la dam ka beisei.
    Chhiar a nuam, a dangdai, a inhmeh tur tak picture / image i dah thiam ka ti.....eng genre nge ni ta ber ang le.....?

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  5. true, former overcome by latter life. way of life

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  6. He2 eng genre nge moni don le aw??? Its poetry... lets just put it that way... and wait for a genius to answer our question :)

    And thnx everyone... for appreciating!!!

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  7. Intelligent thought processing at work here, love it.

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  8. Waiting for more masterpiece such as this.

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  9. B.E.A.Utiful................ Ka biography tur chu... :P

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  10. Very Creative...5 Stars

    Chhurzz1234

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  11. My friend... You want me to criticize it. But there's none to criticize at all...

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  12. My only criticism is that the person above me is very ugly :D

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  13. lol @illusionaire, 'gothic' has a fragrance of its own in its ugliness... our fren here is no exception...

    @chuaululiana, thnx and hope ud continue to read

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  14. @ MS & BD Chawngthu: I ain't no genius but lemme answer your question.. this kind of poem can be called 'Couplet' but it's not the original 'Couplet' because it goes as 'a' 'b' 'a' 'b' The orginal one goes as 'a' 'a' 'b' 'b' 'c' 'c'... :-)

    @ BD Chawngthu: ka tan i rawn ziak chu a ni em lo maw?? :-P I just love it...

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  15. Else there's a slang name for it... it's called 'ABAB' ... or it can be 'Epic' :-) Sorry... I forgot the name given for 'ABAB' poem, but it's also called 'ABAB'

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  16. No dear.... the poem is not meant to rhyme... nor is it lengthy narrative heroic poem, definitely not an epic...

    Free Verse.... dats was it is :)

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  17. Very good poem....great mind at work!!

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  18. @Bd... if You compare between @Illusionaire and Me... You know who is ugly :)))))))))

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  19. :) both? Geeze im not good at guessing... one thing, lets all enjoy this poem, shall we... :)

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  20. Love it, love it, much more creative then u say u are. the concept is 1st class. Thumbsup

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  21. K'chu hei k fav poem ni ta berin k hria... :)

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  22. it shows the existentialist's point of view for me .... the writer, or should I say, the speaker in this poem searches for his or her true identity through the meanings there is in his or her life... seems to me like it is a quest to find the truth but having nowhere to be led... However, on another course transcendentalism plays its own role here too... the redemption of the soul that is there as an ending to the poem... it clearly speaks of something that suffice the speaker's erupted(troubled) thought process as seem from the previous lines... All in all, it is indeed a beautiful post modernistic poem as far as the idea is concerned as is clear from the lines itself

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